Proofreading web copy – the basics

As humans we’re all fallible and can frequently make mistakes, it’s only natural. When looking at web content, there’s a vast number of errors which can and do occur naturally, and these could be the difference between that illusive ‘like’ or share, or even a conversion.

Take a look at the list below to check you’ve got the basics covered:

Spelling

Spelling is the first point of call when proofreading any type of content. A good knowledge of spelling is always helpful, so make sure you know your ‘ps’ from your ‘qs’. Using a comprehensive and up to date spell checker is even more effective as it picks up misspelled words and can highlight if a sentence doesn’t make grammatical sense. Spell check covers the basics but watch out for improper use of words such ‘their/there/they’re,’ as they’re easily misused!

Does your copy have the X Factor?

Does your copy have the X Factor?

Punctuation

As for punctuation, there are those who never want to use it and must get out of breath from not pausing once despite the sentence being really long. Phew! Then there are those who are constantly ponderous, pausing, left, right, and centre; it can go from one extreme to the other! A key thing to remember is not only the use of full stops and capital letters, but the correct use of the trusty comma. Pop a comma at the end of every clause, so the reader not only knows when to take a breath, but it also helps to break up a points within a complex sentence. For more dramatic pauses there’s the hyphen which warrants a long steely pause, similar to that experienced when awaiting the winner of The X Factor. The old hyphen should be reserved only for an impactful statement, so be sparing with its use.

Grammar

We could be here all day when discussing grammar, and as nice as that would be, there’s a lot to discuss! Remember your English teacher’s constant droning on about how important good grammar is? As much as it pains me to say, they were right. If your memory on grammar is a little rusty then there’s nothing better than to delve your nose into a good book and note how the paragraphs are broken down and the sentences are structured. This will brush away the cobwebs and refresh your memory on grammar and how to use it.

Can you handle the truth?

Can you handle the truth?

Fact checking

We all know how important it is to gets your facts right. Inability to do this can mislead, confuse and misinform people, as well as making you look very silly. When researching, it is crucial to check your facts and there source. Is it reliable? The truth, the whole truth and nothing but the truth so help you God? Well maybe not that far, we won’t try you if it’s not gospel, but ensure your facts are well informed and if in doubt then leave them out. There’s nothing worse than faulty facts.

Genuine insight

Genuine insight or a reliable knowledge of a topic is paramount. No one likes a Billy Liar, so if you don’t have the foggiest about a certain subject, then don’t pretend you do. Pretending, like lying, will only lead to one thing; you get found out. Pinocchio will tell you that this is no walk in the park. Attempting ‘filler’ copy, whereby a writer states the obvious yet skirts around the subject is not advised. Like a Swiss cheese it is painfully obvious if your copy has gaping holes in it due to a lack of knowledge, so it’s best not to include any dud information, should your nose double in size.

Liar liar pants on fire

Liar liar pants on fire

Sub headings

For web content, sub headings are a useful way to break down the myriad of information you can often be bombarded with. No one wants to read reams and reams of untitled content on the web, it will most likely turn your eyes square and your brain to mush. Make it easy for the reader and break it down with a few sub headings to ensure it is easy to read at a glance.

If you follow these basic proofreading steps then you should be well of your way to achieving an accurate, informed and grammatically gleaming copy.

Steph Bell

Steph Bell

About the author

Stephanie Bell is a final year Arts student from Lancaster University who has recently joined us on a 3 week internship where she has been looking after proofreading and writer management.

You can see her Copify profile here and read her articles for the University’s student paper SCAN here.

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Smarter revision tracking on orders

Hundreds of customers now trust Copify to order quality content every month, and we’re working hard to ensure that the management of these orders is as easy as possible.

One part of this process that can quickly become a minefield is revision tracking.

Imagine the scenario: You’ve received your content, and you need one or two tweaks. You request a change and wait for the copywriter to work their magic.

Seems pretty straightforward, huh? Well if you’ve got several hundred orders in progress this presents a series of issues that we have now addresses with a series of new features…

I can’t remember if I requested a change

Previously this meant having to check your sent message folder. You can now see if you’ve sent a message when viewing your list of orders, indicated by the following icon:

At a glance : You've sent a message

At a glance : You’ve sent a message

 Has my order been updated?

Once updated, you’ll be able to see the changes are ready for review, indicated by:

At a glance : Changes ready for review

At a glance : Changes ready for review

What changes have been made to the copy?

You can now also see the entire revision history of your order. When you’re dealing with many hundreds of orders it’s easy to lose track of what changes you asked for.

With the new revision history you can see every modification.

Revision history

Revision history

You can also compare individual revisions, allowing you to see the exact changes made to the content.

Compare changes

Compare changes

 

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Copywriters in TV and film

A rundown of some of the fictional copywriters who have graced both the big and small screen.

Chandler Bing

Chandler Bing – Friends

With his deeply cynical and sarcastic character, Chandler Bing was always going to make a great copywriter. He quit his job as IT procurement manager in season 9 of Friends to pursue his dream of doing something more creative. Contrary to the belief of his flatmates, however, Chandler never worked as a Transpondster.

500 Days of Summer

Tom Hansen – (500) Days of Summer

Joseph Gordon Levitt won a Golden Globe for his portrayal of greetings card copywriter Tom Hansen in the Chick Flick (500) Days of Summer. Hansen is besotted with a co-worker (Summer) played by the predictably kooky Zooey Deschanel. Worth a watch, if only for the excellent soundtrack.

Limitless

Eddie Mora – Limitless

In action thriller Limitless, struggling copywriter Eddie Mora (Bradley Cooper) discovers an experimental drug that unlocks the true potential of his mind, and with the aid of financial mogul Carl Van Loon (Robert De Niro) quickly becomes wealthy and successful.

Peggy and Don - Mad Men

Peggy Olsen – Mad Men

Peggy starts life as a receptionist until her talent for copywriting is spotted during a brainstorming session, where she dreams up the slogan ‘a basket of kisses’ for lipstick brand Belle Jolie. Season 6 of this truly excellent period drama comes to Sky Atlantic on April 10th.

Have we missed anyone?

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Is this the worst slogan ever?

Butlins in Skeggy

Butlins in Skeggy

I don’t usually pay too much attention to TV adverts, but there has been one recently that made me sit up and take note. It’s for Butlins, and it ends with what I believe to be one of the worst, most misguided slogans ever:

“Our true intent is all for your delight.”

Here’s what’s wrong with it:

It’s outdated

Butlins founder Billy Butlin chose this slogan after seeing the words emblazoned across a barrel organ at a 1930s funfair. He was unaware that it was actually a line from Shakespeare’s A Midsummer Night’s Dream, written in the 16th Century. 80 years on, it still sounds ridiculously dated.

I doubt that most of their punters will really appreciate the literary reference either.

It’s too wordy   

Slogans should be concise and to the point, like these:

  • Beanz Meanz Heinz
  • Every Little Helps
  • Just Do It

Butlins have gone for the exact opposite of this, a slogan that is unnecessarily wordy. Why say “our true intent” when you could just as easily convey the same message with a simple “our aim” or “our goal”. The same goes for “all for your delight”, why not just say “your delight”?

It’s too formal

The two phrases that are really out of place here are “true intent” and “all for your delight”. I suppose using the word ‘true’ makes it sound honest and wholesome, which are attributes that you would associate with a family holiday, but ‘intent’ is way too formal in this context.

Then there’s the word ‘delight’, I can’t help thinking that people would have related more to ‘happiness’ or ‘pleasure’.

It doesn’t address the right audience

If you’re going to be pretentious, make sure that your audience will appreciate it. John Lewis customers, for example, will probably feel a certain smugness at being able to decipher:

“Never knowingly undersold”

It works for John Lewis, but I’m fairly certain that their customers don’t holiday at Butlins. Can you imagine the following conversation around the dinner table in your average, middle class family home…

Mum: “Where shall we go on holiday this year darling?”
Dad: “Well, if we save up 97 tokens from The Sun we can go to Butlins in Skegness for a fiver…”

I don’t think so.

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